Who's that Pokemon, with Haikou Poems! Guess the right one.
Deep in a forest, red eyes stare
a little green monster
appears here
On a lake side pond
A gator dances on
thinking he owns the world
Flamey little birdy thing
sitting in a tree
chirps a little spark
(answers: bulbasaur tododile torchic)
i love it
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I love your haikus! If I hadn't read the title, I still think eventually I would've been able to realize that you were talking about Pokemon. I find it somewhat like a game trying to figure out who is who. Great use of nature, even when you're taking about a made up world. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow, good on you for taking this assignment and letting your readers fall back into their childhoods! I really admire your unique spin on haikus, which usually contain some philosophical message. You took the style of poetry, respected the rule of implementing elements of nature, yet managed to make them so fun!
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